Thursday, 24 June 2010

The bond

Take me by the hand and walk
far away from here,
stride, big galloping strides so our lungs swell, and we lift as air balloons
and walk, until our feet are raw and our legs will carry us no further,
then sit with me as we ache and darkness falls around my ears
help me to hollow a tunnel of light
and grab onto that searing beam in the aim we’ll be pulled out;
into the rainbow,
listen when I scream my whispers, and nod
clap your hands around my face and shake me;
but nod, nevertheless,
and when you whistle, even in the absence of melody;
I’ll dance, while you jump in puddles -
all the while we’ll never once look at the clock
and in return, I promise:
that when I can still see you, but we’re separated by glass,
I’ll rest my hand on your lingering handprint;
and walk with you.

(c) Copyright Jane Edwards 2010

21 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hello just like to say that is one ofthe most beautiful things I have read.It shows depth and meanning more than words can say

Donkey said...

I was anonymous above,have you been published,if not you should be it is beautiful

Ink Champagne said...

Hi Andy,

Glad you like it.

Yes, I have been published in an anthology - once - many moons ago!

I'm picking up the pace with my writing again and hopefully will have more to share over the coming months :)

J

Donkey said...

Well thats good news as you have a creative talent there.Where can I obtain a copy of the anthology.I wish I was creative,the closest thing I have to creativity is playing the bass.Im trying myself to write a song as appose to poetry Im just struggling with the music at the mo.
How did you get into this form of expression?

Ink Champagne said...

Hi,

I don't think the book is in print anymore - Inspired by Verse, Forward Press, Anchor Books 2003. I only had one poem included in it though, not the whole anthology - unfortunately!

I'm not sure how I got into it. I loved English at school and wrote a lot in the years after I left but then didn't start writing again until a few months ago.

As for you - just sit down with a blank piece of paper and write - you'll get your song eventually :)

Donkey said...

wise words,thank you for the inspiration,all the words done now and Im putting together the bass track now sounds like a cross between dream a little dream of me by mamma cass and sitting here in silence on my own by oasis.

Keep up the good work

Donkey said...

do you think prose is self confessional to some degree a bit like a TAT test?

Ink Champagne said...

Nah. Most of mine are dreamt up.

Donkey said...

well ur dreams are very valuble then.r u an english lit graduate?im sure u must be given the variety and depth of ur work!im lucky if I can string two words together in a legal file lol

Ink Champagne said...

No, Never studied it. Should do though!

Donkey said...

You should do you would walk it with your artistic flair!
Just read the train journey poem,again excellent,have you ever thought of tying poems like to to the Home Office Respect Agenda? its a good way of publicity for your work.I used the respect team in a schools project and it worked well.

Anyway sorry for interupting your creative flow,keep up the good work

Regards

Andy

Ink Champagne said...

No I haven't but it sounds interesting... I wasn't aware of it - just had to Wiki it! May have creative flair, but current agenda's are not a strong point! :)

Donkey said...

well if u decide u want to tie ur work in wiv home office or education themes give me a shout and ill help,your work should reach a bigger audience!:)

Ink Champagne said...

why thank you :)
Just out of interest, how did you come across my blog? I haven't promoted it much - only to friends and colleagues

Donkey said...

messing about on internet when I should be working lol,i put in advanced search on babel altars vista and it brought it up I was looking for inkjet flywheels for a printer for champagne certificate paper lol

Ink Champagne said...

Haha - at least I know I have a captive audience of people who search that criteria. Madness! I'll have to launch a tv ad similar to that of compare the meerkat - just incase it takes off haha :)

Donkey said...

compare the ink champagne.com love it lol ill name u in a song and get my mate in his band 101 to sing it!

Ink Champagne said...

I'll keep my ears pinned lol...

Donkey said...

lol u could also use subliminal messaging on ur blog like in the excorcist- check out ink champagne.com check out ink champagne.com check out ink champagne.com lmao just don't get caught by APA lol

Ink Champagne said...

Or launch a brand of cheap-ish fizz and brand it!!! :)

Donkey said...

as long as its not bellabrusco or lambrini I'm sick to the sight of the stuff lmao